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mayoraaseiHarry Potter MPregs works as emetics Oo;;;;
I only got about 3 paragraphs into the fic (..and no one's even gotten pregnant yet) and I started feeling sick.
Hmm.
Perhaps it should become part of prescription medicine? XDD
PS, can someone tell me what this sentence is supposed to mean?!
Over the past few years their relationship had become considerably cooler and now had gotten to the point where it had become as strained as the carrots covering baby Charles' face.
I only got about 3 paragraphs into the fic (..and no one's even gotten pregnant yet) and I started feeling sick.
Hmm.
Perhaps it should become part of prescription medicine? XDD
PS, can someone tell me what this sentence is supposed to mean?!
Over the past few years their relationship had become considerably cooler and now had gotten to the point where it had become as strained as the carrots covering baby Charles' face.
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Date: 2006-07-14 11:24 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2006-07-14 01:14 pm (UTC)Without the simile would have been a good sentence... dunno what carrots covering baby charles' face has anything to do with it...
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Date: 2006-07-14 01:17 pm (UTC)http://forums.fictionalley.org/park/printthread.php?s=916790b958cabc7af2324f79b8c958d5&threadid=40666&perpage=20&pagenumber=6
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Date: 2006-07-14 01:25 pm (UTC)Exactly. As strained as carrots............argh. It makes my neurons misfire *cries*
Harhar. Yeah, the post is right XD MPREG is possible (and extremely dangerous in case of such possibility), just no ficcer has done it in a biologically convincing way.
I do give a bit of leeway for people who use magic as excuse, though not much ~~;;; The idea still icks me no end.
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Date: 2006-07-14 01:38 pm (UTC)shape of carrot? O_o; heh. >_>;; dunno........ link to that fic please?
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Date: 2006-07-14 01:49 pm (UTC)The characters are necessarily soppy and OOC, of course, and the timeline makes no logical sense whatsoever (Sirius is married to Harry but they're living together with James and Lily?!?!)
It didn't let me reach this site before (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2696914/1/).
If you have trouble, try the author (http://www.fanfiction.net/u/627900/). It's the first fic.
Excuse the bad HTML. Has been corrected and deleted.