fanfics again! yay!
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This excerpt quite literally induced tears to spring to my eyes:
Draco's POV
I don't regret anything I did with the Mudblood. She deserves it for being vulnerably cute.
I really thought she will be a successful career woman after Hogwarts. She was the brightest among all of us for crying out loud! And she got me always second best!
So, why was she standing in the middle of the rain with those skimpy clothes? What was she thinking? In the middle of a dark street full of deranged people who gets a kick of taking women down for a night.
Being the heartless, handsome, most eligible bachelor that I am, I couldn't leave someone I know out there. Even if it's a filthy, beautiful Mudblood whore.
...
There was something off about his voice. It sounded quite wrong, not at all like his usual sultry, and scathing, tones.
Nonononononono!!!!!!!!! Only Lymond can sound both sultry and scathing in the same breath!!!! *Cries*
there were mounds of chocolate frogs heaped up in every available nook, aside from the four seats that the stunning men were planted in.
...Ewwww.....mounds of chocolate frogs...and planted men?!?!
They had seven boys ( it was a family tradition)
...Amongst the strangest family traditions I've seen....
Then they turned the corner and. Dum Dum Dum.
I knew it!! I knew it was coming!!! A Harry Potter fanfic with its own background music!!
LOOK AWAY, SNAPE FANS
They randomly stepped out of the common room only to be intercepted by the evil Lotions master,Professor Snap [...] who made odd noises when he walked and smelled like lilacs.
Finally, descriptors that make one sound sooooo attractive....
emerald green eyes that jumped out at anybody, pouty lips that made her look like a fish and chocolate brown eyes that would make any woman a chocoholic
...I think I'm off chocolate for a week.
Draco's POV
I don't regret anything I did with the Mudblood. She deserves it for being vulnerably cute.
I really thought she will be a successful career woman after Hogwarts. She was the brightest among all of us for crying out loud! And she got me always second best!
So, why was she standing in the middle of the rain with those skimpy clothes? What was she thinking? In the middle of a dark street full of deranged people who gets a kick of taking women down for a night.
Being the heartless, handsome, most eligible bachelor that I am, I couldn't leave someone I know out there. Even if it's a filthy, beautiful Mudblood whore.
...
There was something off about his voice. It sounded quite wrong, not at all like his usual sultry, and scathing, tones.
Nonononononono!!!!!!!!! Only Lymond can sound both sultry and scathing in the same breath!!!! *Cries*
there were mounds of chocolate frogs heaped up in every available nook, aside from the four seats that the stunning men were planted in.
...Ewwww.....mounds of chocolate frogs...and planted men?!?!
They had seven boys ( it was a family tradition)
...Amongst the strangest family traditions I've seen....
Then they turned the corner and. Dum Dum Dum.
I knew it!! I knew it was coming!!! A Harry Potter fanfic with its own background music!!
LOOK AWAY, SNAPE FANS
They randomly stepped out of the common room only to be intercepted by the evil Lotions master,Professor Snap [...] who made odd noises when he walked and smelled like lilacs.
Finally, descriptors that make one sound sooooo attractive....
emerald green eyes that jumped out at anybody, pouty lips that made her look like a fish and chocolate brown eyes that would make any woman a chocoholic
...I think I'm off chocolate for a week.
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Date: 2006-07-02 08:38 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2006-07-02 09:27 am (UTC)Personally, I quite like the "Snap" quotes XDDD I'm having fun envisioning him as Lotions master who smells like lilac. The continuity is astounding.
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Date: 2006-07-02 12:37 pm (UTC)